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"RODERICH!" You pushed your way through busy airport crowd as soon as you caught sight of the familiar chocolate, brown hair; you've come to love.

Turning at the call of his name, the Austrian stopped to look behind him but was greeted with his childhood friend pouncing onto his back. "Hey! It's been forever! I missed you!"

"[___]," Roderich let out an irritable sigh, "get off. We're in an airport, at least act a little decent."

Pouting, you slid off and landed on your feet. "That's no way to greet a friend!" You puffed out your cheeks a little bit and added a playful frown. Roderich blushed and looked away at the sight of how cute you were acting.

"Whatever, let's just get going, okay?" He grabbed your hand and began to lead the two of you out of the airport. Your eyebrows rose when he took your hand and you smiled when you peeked over at his face and saw how red it had grown.

Roderich Edelstein was your best friend from childhood; he was one of those introverted kids that got picked on a lot. You were the first one to introduce yourself to him and actually talk to him. Since then, you two have stuck together like glue. But Roderich's family came from Austria and at the end of his middle school years, they moved back. Separating you guys for four years.

You knew he's always had a major stick up his ass since time began. But that didn't stop you from falling head over heels in love with him. Even as a small child, you always thought he was the cutest. From his lush, dark brown hair with a single strand curling up, the beauty mark bestowed just underneath his lip, to his lovely, amethyst irises. In short, Roderich had grown into looking like a male model.

Stepping out of the airport with your luggage, you wait for Roderich to drive around with his car. You stood in awe at your surroundings, this was your first time visiting Austria and you never knew it for being such a pretty nation.

"[___], what're you doing? Get in the car already." Roderich said while loading the automobile, snapping you out of your trance.

"[___], what're you doing? Get in the car already." You replied, mimicking him in a voice way too high pitched to be his own while climbing into the car, Roderich followed shortly.

Pressing yourself up against the window, you resumed gawking at the sight of a completely new place. 'It's so pretty here…' you thought.

"Ja, well, this is Austria. Nothing special really, but I take you it you like it."

You nodded enthusiastically; overjoyed at the fact you were going to be spending an entire weekend in such a place.

As soon as you arrived at Roderich's cozy home, you made sure to be quick with unpacking. Roderich waited patiently out on the front porch.

"BOO!"

"Are you done unpacking, [___]?" Roderich turned with around a bored expression, clearly unimpressed with your mischief ways.

"Geez, Roddy, you've become so not fun nowadays…"
His face lit up into a faint shade of red, "O-only address me with my name! Roderich! Not

'Roddy'!" You laughed at his flustered reaction and strolled off back towards the car.

"Wait, [___]," quickly grabbing your wrist, Roderich directed you in the direction down the sidewalk, "we're gonna walk around today. If that's okay?"

"Sure thing, I've been sitting too much today anyway."

You two made your way down the sidewalk, getting closer and closer to the small town Roderich has become well acquainted with. Still hand in hand, anybody would mistake you guys as a couple, the thought made you blush a little but you brushed it off.

The rest of the day you two window-shopped and walked, chatting idly and having fun. As the day winded down, you guys entered a small clothing shop that had a full rack of ridiculous hats, as if it were Lady Gaga's goodwill.

"Here, Roddy, I think this one would look good on you." You grabbed a plastic, white fedora that had stripes all over it and a feather dangling off the side and placed it on Roderich's head.

He glanced at a mirror and cocked an eyebrow, "I don't know [___], I don't think this look is right for me." His voice sounded serious but that was no surprise since you already knew he was a rather fashionable, or as he called it, classy , gentlemen.

You attempted to keep a straight face with much difficulty, "Uh huh, I think you're right too. Maybe a more aerodynamic hat would suit you better."

Roderich turned and squinted at you, figuring out that you were poking fun at his seriousness. You grinned and excused yourself, walking over towards the back of the store, only browsing.

"Hallo,kann ich Ihnen helfen?" You looked up and were met face to face with a guy looking about your age. He wore a nametag with Bernhard written on it.

"Oh uh… I don't… I don't speak German…"

"Oh, my apologies. You're lucky I speak English then." He smiled and began picking up small chat with what little English he knew. Throughout the conversation, you couldn't help but think he was kind of cute and was most likely flirting with you. 'Too bad I already like somebody else…'

"[___]? Hey, [___], where did you g-!" Roderich stopped in his tracks when he saw you talking with the employee, his mouth twitched as his usual irritable scowl turned into a malicious glare. "[___]." He said again, this time stepping behind you and placing a hand on your shoulder. "It's starting to get dark, let's head back." His eyes glued to Bernhard's.

You flinched at the harshness laced in his voice, putting his other hand on your other shoulder; Roderich led you out of the building.

"Woah, Roderich. What's up? Why're you so pissed?"

"Don't talk to them." He grumbled, still behind you.

"What? Don't talk to who?"

"Them! Other guys!"

"Why? You're being unreasonable!"

Minutes of hesitation passed before you were pulled you back with great force as Roderich wrapped his arms around you in a tight hug, "Because I-!... I…" His grip tightened, "I love you, [___]." You froze. "And I only want you to look at me."

Silence followed after Roderich's confession. He released you from the embrace and took a step back. "I take it you don't feel the same way." He muttered then turned to leave but was stopped when he felt something grab his hand.

"N-no, you're wrong." You swallowed and looked up at his face, "I-ich liebe dich auch, Roderich." Roderich's eyes widened. "I have for a while now and am so happy you do too." You smiled nervously, "Heh. Yay…?"

And for the first time in ages, Roderich laughed. It was a light and dainty laugh, more of a gentlemen's chuckle, if you will. "Thank God, I was afraid… I was afraid things would be different between us if I confessed. I'm so glad it worked out." And with that, he leaned forward and planted a sweet kiss on your lips. "Danke, [___]."
Hallo,kann ich Ihnen helfen? - Hello, can I help you with anything?

Danke - Thanks



A request from :icon00-ninja:

I'm sorry if Austria seems a little out of character... Also sorry for the wait!

I hope you like it :)

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:iconaliceenglandkirkland:
TuT THANK YOU. I can now be at peace knowing that there are Austria fics for my unhealthy love for him
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IndepenStud8 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
You are very welcome :)
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Mirovyye-Soyuzniki Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OHMAHGADDDDD, Austria is my fav character of all time, I'm so glad you made this! cx Nosebleed 
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IndepenStud8 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Aw, thank you! I like Austria too, I think his character is underrated sometimes :iconaustriaplz:
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Sushi-Cutie Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hee hee hee, German... xD I've read this before, it's a nice story. And help me either anything? I don't think you could handle it, honey. xD
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IndepenStud8 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Aw, thanks for reading it again! I'm glad you liked it :)
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Sushi-Cutie Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yup, it's always nice to see a good story among others. Hey, here's a trip for everyone who writes these. Maybe try writing one that isn't completely about music. I know, shocker, right? ;)
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Female-Canada Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
A poem about the car he wanted to get me into:
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I HAVE A GUN GET IN THE VAN
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IndepenStud8 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Accurate yet, beautiful. :iconbeautifulplz:
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Female-Canada Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! Thank you! 
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agerose15 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconfangirlzplz: AWWW!! SORE WA KAWAII DESU!!!
:iconheartrollplz:
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IndepenStud8 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconiloveyouplz: ありがとうございます!!
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agerose15 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Student General Artist
doitashimashte !!
:iconyayaustriaplz:

He's my favorite!!
:iconblushplz:
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Sushi-Cutie Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

Yay~ I love German!^^ :iconfangirlzplz:

 

Jerk Self: Well, no wonder why, dummkopf, it's 'cuz you ARE German.

 

Me: Hey! You don't have to be so mean! :iconpout-plz:

 

Jerk Self: Ah, that's right, you're also Polish, my bad.

 

Me: Yeah, and American, Irish, Scottish, Native American, and English. Point? :iconpoutplz: ANYWAYS, good story.

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IndepenStud8 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Haha oh no! Jerk-Self is too mean! But thank you so much for reading, I'm glad you liked it :)
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Sushi-Cutie Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I did, thanks for writing a good story.^^
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SaeLinLee Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, that was sweet :aww:
I like reading Reader-Inserts with Austria, sadly there aren't much out there. And even more less that AREN'T awkward for me to read, since I speak German perfectly... <- Is Prussian
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IndepenStud8 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconcblushplz: Thank you! Yeah, I agree, Austria-Reader Inserts are not very popular/common... Such a shame...

You speak German?! Wow :) So the German in my story is okay?
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SaeLinLee Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem at all!
Yeah, it's very sad... I actually like Austria very much, he can be so cute sometimes :aww:
Of course I do! I would be a bad Prussian if I won't, right? And besides I live in Germany... No, Prussia. I live in Prussia. Btw... Can you imagine that my Russian teacher doesn't know Prussia?! o_O
Random things are random. :iconfacepokerplz:
Mmmh, I guess? x'D Otherwise I would've corrected it, as the Grammar nazi I am x'D
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dearbealovedquietcan Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
awww~ ^3^
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IndepenStud8 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:) I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Shanti8888 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
a great fanfic owo

but actually it should be "Hallo,kann ich Ihnen helfen?" (hello,can i help you?) since that's how shop assistants usually say it and "Hallo, kann Ihnen mit allem helfen?" is gramatically wrong XD

just thought i'd point it out :3

(me ish from austria 8D XD)
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IndepenStud8 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Oh thank you! German isn't my first language so thank you :)

I'm glad you liked my little story :heart:
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Memichow Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Student Writer
:iconcatmeowplz: Ho.........................Ge.........................................
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IndepenStud8 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
D-does this mean you liked it...?
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Memichow Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Student Writer
Ho.........................Ge................................... Azu-nyan i wuv it
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IndepenStud8 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:iconarigatouplz: Really?! Thank you :) I'm happy you read my series~
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Memichow Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Student Writer
:)
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Russialover174 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
holy crap, if you're suddenly bombarded by love and such from :iconvulpix70:... my fault XDD
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IndepenStud8 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Haha it's cool. I'm prepared for the bombardment of love :heart:
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Russialover174 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you can't write this good and not ^^
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IndepenStud8 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Me? Write good? Psh... No... no. I still have plenty of room to improve, but thank you :)
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Russialover174 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nu nu nu! anyone can improve, but you're already really great! :iconletmehugyouplz:
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Russialover174 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nu nu nu! anyone can improve, but you're already really great! :iconletmehugyouplz:
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IndepenStud8 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:iconohstopityouplz:
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00-Ninja Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this so much! Thank you! :iconsuperheroglompplz:
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IndepenStud8 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:iconchuuplz: You are oh so welcome! My pleasure :)
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Mforever12 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
GAH! That's adorable!!! I LOVE IT! <3
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IndepenStud8 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:iconohstopityouplz: Thank you so much, I'm glad you loved it! :)
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Mforever12 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
CX I DID! Oh it was so cute~<3 I'd love to be Austria's childhood friend <3
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IndepenStud8 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Yay! Thank you again :)
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Mforever12 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
Haha no problem~<3
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kittara-jaganshi Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This was cute! :D
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IndepenStud8 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Aw Thanks! :)
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Ink--Rainbow Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
OH DA FLUFF!!!!! lol Roddy was such an ass back there XD ;w;
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IndepenStud8 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thank GOd you think it's fluffy! That's exactly what I was hoping :iconasdfghplz:

Yeah... he can be an ass :iconyayaustriaplz:
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Ink--Rainbow Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
lol your welcome~
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